Qrezy Code Code itibaren Ramgarh Bhunder, Punjab 151509, India
2010 Monarch Nominee I was really digging this one until........ "Anyone could tell by looking at her that she an airhead." That sentence just doesn't fit with the rest of the writing, the smooth flow of the book comes to a screeching halt right there. And then there's another little bump, "Riding the fox like a bucking bronco..." In and of themselves I don't have a problem with either sentence but they are so out of sync with the rest of the story that it's like hitting a stop sign.