Mario Velasquez Velasquez itibaren Pleasanton, IA 50065, Birleşik Devletler itibaren Pleasanton, IA 50065, Birleşik Devletler

I know what you're thinking--why would I of all people, who gives practically 4 or 5 stars to almost every book I read give a book like this one two stars? Well let me tell you the kinks I found about this book that I absolutely disliked. 1. Excessive typos - there were a couple places where quotations marks were missing and such, also random letters were changed and I think what happened was that when J.D. Stroube was typing her book, she forgot to stop the auto spell check thingies from occurring and when they did, didn't see them being fixed. 2. Where did that ending come from? (out of the blue...outoftheblue...out of the blue) 3. By the time I ended the book, I felt intensely dissatisfied. I felt like...how should I describe this?...unfinished and abrupt. The fact that Stroube whipped out such a heart-wrenched-in-the-wrong-way ending took away the three stars from my review. The reason I'm posting this is because my writing used to look like that I sincerely believe Stroube can make it better. Also, I read a sample on Smashwords and it had some material that I didn't see in the book and I was wondering why. If Stroube reprints this book, makes a second edition and proofreads the thing and adds more hints leading up to the ending, I believe she'll make the plot more worthwhile.